Gone Under

by Shadow

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I was losing my grip again, my body going under, going into the other realm.

I was scared as hell.

My lungs were trapped, I could feel them shriveling, I was suffocating.
Again.
It was the second time it had happened, the second time I had gone under.
The last time It had been horrible, for almost four minutes. I was almost dead. And I couldn’t tell them. They wouldn’t beleive me. So I stood huddled in the corner, tears rolling down my face.
Now I was actually dying, the last bit of air squeezing through my lungs.
I then saw a face, A sunken, dead face, right from a horror movie.

But this was real.

And I was soon

Dead.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Gone Under

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    O…M….G. If I have nightmares I am so blaming you!

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    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The first person POV in this is creepy cool. From start to finish, you kept my attention with ficlet flair. Well told and well done!

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    Shadow's Buddy Icon Shadow

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Thank you very much ^^

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    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 11 months ago

    verrrrrrrrry nice! impressed! especially enjoyed the ‘lungs shriveling’ line. very…easy to visualize…=$

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    ItsNotEasy_BeingGreen's Buddy Icon ItsNotEasy_BeingGreen

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    holy crap, that terrified me.

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