Above

by THX 0477

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Above

Above the morays of contemporary life
Above the rote and dry facts
Above the catastrophes and pratfalls of socializing
Above all that, you find yourself
Above the whims of childish spite
Above the quotidian romantic hurts
Above the things we all do to make it just one more day in this juxtaposition of opposing wills that do not care who
we REALLY are
You are you

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    was quotidian part of the challenge, or didya just thorw in your own rarely used word? good job I liked the Above… parts. even though it went over my head lol, your obviously educated.

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    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lol to kermit

    and i really enjoyed this

    it has a clear and palpable message to it – we shouldnt fall prey to the morays of contemporary life
    whatever the hell morays means lol

    and nice profile update :)

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    Kiarra's Buddy Icon Kiarra

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awesome….:)

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Sigh, you caught me. Quotidian was not part of the challenge, but it fit with having had to use catastrophe and juxtposition…and I’m a whopping great huge geek with too much education. Really, you don’t want to know how many years.

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    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    From one geek to another – well done, my friend. Very well done indeed! I don’t know what’s bigger, your vocabulary or your ficlet writing prowess… Bravo!

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    That’s an easy one, Yoda. I have a really big vocabulary. Immense, even.

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    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. Great job! Even though you did change the word-tense. (Is that right?) That’s o.k, I don’t mind! :) BTW I would never have been able to use Quotidianin a sentence!

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    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Stupid computer! Quotidian not Quotidianin!

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