Ghosts In A Cave

by Three Gryphon[s]

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Stomp, stomp.

The young children twirled.

Badum, Badum.

The fire crackled.

Stomp, stomp.

The cave walls shuddered.

Badum, Badum.

The tribe could feel the mountains heart beating.

Stomp, stomp.

And, though they were now merely ghosts, they danced and stomped all night.

Badum, badum.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Ghosts In A Cave

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was realy cool, loved the drum beat, i’d have never thought to spell it badum, but saying it aloud it works , well done.

  2. Ghosts In A Cave

    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I like how you used the picture as a prompt. I would’ve loved to see a little more description though.

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