Hello Fire

by SunEyedGirl

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Fire
you light what was dark before
Fire
i have known you for as long as i can remember
Fire
i wish i had never met you
Fire
you dont come around
Fire
i cant burn for anyone but you
Fire
you take the breath from me
Fire
i would die if anyone lit from you
Fire
you burn my hopes and dreams
Fire
you smoke my eyes

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Hello Fire

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    HM. That’s interesting. Meaning, I wonder why you chose fire?

  2. Hello Fire

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    you smoke my eyes? ehhh? rest is good, though.

  3. Hello Fire

    SunEyedGirl's Buddy Icon SunEyedGirl

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Fire because it’s symbolism can be both intense and passionate, but also destructive and devestating.

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