not worth the time

by Black Ink

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so he said he has a girlfriend but he was hugging me and he was so happy but he stll smelled like himself and his voice still sounded like honey so i guess nothing had changed. Apparently I was the only girl not left broken hearted because I gave up on him a long time ago. But he wasn’t even sure if I liked him and honestly I decided that was a secret I’d never tell because if i told him how happy I was when he said he would wait with me after school I’d probably be making a fooll of myself. But it’s okay because he has a girlfriend and her name isn’t mine but I don’t care, he’s not worth my time.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. not worth the time

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 11 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Stop trying to smoosh everything into a paragraph. You have a lot of emotion here – separating it into separate paragraphs allows the reader time to digest one emotion before moving on to the next.

  2. not worth the time

    Black Ink's Buddy Icon Black Ink

    Posted 11 months ago

    you know the funny thing is when i wrote this, i was writing it to a friend and just happened to decide to post it. i actually hate it because of exactly what you said, it’s too much emotion and too little time.

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