Frog Giggin'

by Stovohobo

He shushed her with a finger to his lips. She peered worriedly over at him, nervously fingering her long auburn hair.

“Where is it?” she whispered, eyes wide.

He winked. “Just there, in the undergrowth,” he said, gesturing ambiguously.

He thrust his arms into the dry foliage and rustled around. A small croak emanated from the brush.

“It’s there, Jen!” he cried, working himself into a frenzy.

She stifled a shout and bent over. “Gawl, that thing shore is big!” she said, eyes like discs, taking in all there was to see of the spectacular creature. The boy grasped the thing tight in his dusty fingers.

“Whaddaya reckon it is, Jen? Frog or toad?” He grinned, and held it up to her face.

She squealed. “I dunno, just get it out of my face!”

“Well, either way, Ma won’t let us keep it…we can’t let her know we were out on the bayou, either. Got it?”

She nodded and followed her older brother faithfully across the swampy muck.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Frog Giggin'

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 11 months ago

    Fun to see someone else plumbing the depths of the American South for material. Southerners are just fun.

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    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Good material & nicely written. Southerners are fun – unless you’re talking about the ones in the movie “Deliverance” – I reckon’ I’ll stay away from them a spell.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 11 months ago

    Scary movie, Deliverence, but dueling banjos rock!

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Sweet & gooey. I like it.

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