Even the Voices Have left Me

by SKermitgorf

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It was dark, I felt claustrophobic. The last thing I remember is the voices in my head, telling me to kill my sister Lolly.

I Remember picking up the ax, wielding it over her head and slamming it down. Kill her ,the voices insisted.

The ax separated us forever, blood poured out of the sides of both our heads, where we had been conjoined for twenty two years.

The pain was excruciating.

Then I passed out.

But where was I now ?

So dark. My head resting upon a soft…a pillow.. OH NOO it can’t be!!

I was free from Lolly.
I can’t..breath.. I’m so alone, even the voices have left me.

They buried me ALIVE !!!

But I am Not dead!!

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Even the Voices Have left Me

    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    creepy

    i always get SOOO freaked out by people being buried alive

    i watched this episode of Lost once where they were paralyzed and so they got buried alive…..FRREEEAAAAKKKKYYYYY

    im seriously freaked out now…aaaahhh

  2. Even the Voices Have left Me

    ItsNotEasy_BeingGreen's Buddy Icon ItsNotEasy_BeingGreen

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ergh, i blame you if i can’t sleep tonight.

  3. Even the Voices Have left Me

    Kiarra's Buddy Icon Kiarra

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    dang, she messed herself up

  4. Even the Voices Have left Me

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Very freaky combo of command hallucinations, conjoined twins, fratrecide (spelling?), AND being buried alive. Sort of seems like cheating to put in so many different freaky things, don’t you think? Just kidding.

  5. Even the Voices Have left Me

    A Clockwork Apple's Buddy Icon A Clockwork Apple

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That awesome. Very creative.

  6. Even the Voices Have left Me

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    What a great opener – nicely done!

  7. Even the Voices Have left Me

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    youse gotta read Voices- the 1st part of this.

  8. Even the Voices Have left Me

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    OMGOMGOMG
    I am sooo going to have nightmares!
    JK! That really freaked me out though.

  9. Even the Voices Have left Me

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Cool the intent was to give nightmares, so glad to have achieved that.

  10. Even the Voices Have left Me

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    OOh. You’re mean…
    :)

  11. Even the Voices Have left Me

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m trying to win a challenge here LOL !!

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