In the Psychiatric Unit -- Holly

by someday_93

There’s only so long a person can take it. The voices, I mean. They followed me everywhere. To school, to orchestra practice, home…I just couldn’t take it anymore. Lots of people say that, I know. But even the voices told me my time had come.

It’s time to die… they hissed.

My tool of choice was a razorblade, applied to my left wrist. Red blood, pain, then…nothing. Just how it should have been. But the nothing faded into stark white, and the smell of disinfectant. A crisp sheet was tucked in around me.

“I’m Kerri,” said a woman in navy blue scrubs. “I’m your staff person tonight.”

“Where am I?” I asked, as politely as I could, under the circumstances.

“St. Luke’s Hospital,” she replied. “The psychiatric unit.”

“Oh.” It didn’t really register.

But it did. Counselors, roommates, therapists, doctors…it all fell into place. And a diagnosis—“Schizophrenia.”

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  1. In the Psychiatric Unit -- Holly

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    it’s time to die they hissed
    fav line^
    i lovee how half your stories could really be happening to somebody =]
    great job =]

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nicely done. Nobody likes it on the psych unit…well, some people do, but they’re really off.

  3. In the Psychiatric Unit -- Holly

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Well, I vaguely liked it on the psych unit, cause it was sort of a step back from real life, but yeah, I don’t think it’s anyone’s favorite place to be.

  4. In the Psychiatric Unit -- Holly

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    LOVE IT WITH A PASSION !!!!!!!!

  5. In the Psychiatric Unit -- Holly

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    cool! these are really great! i wanted to do something like this but i have no insight on the subject and i’ve had no free time to get some. well, i’m glad someone did it and did it well!

  6. In the Psychiatric Unit -- Holly

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Hmm…if by insight you mean spending time on the psych ward, it’s probably a good idea if you don’t get that free time…

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