A Bad Feeling {Simon Story}

by Alexa ♥

When Simon woke up that Saturday, he had no knowledge of the twisting, fateful day ahead of him.

He thought it would be a good day.

The sun was shining as it rarely did this far into October in Michigan. His mother didn’t need him to do anything, so he had no plans. He hoped, as always, that he might see Sarah. She’d moved to Nain Rouge just after he had, and they explored the town and the college campus together. They’d also been through some not-so-great times, but Simon preferred not to think about that.

Of course, she had no idea that he’d spent a great deal of time in a mental hospital. It’s just not the sort of thing you say to impress a woman.

The bad feeling started as an itch. By eleven, it’d worked itself into a frenzy. He went outside to shake it, but it grew. It reached full strength outside Mrs. B’s house. That’s when he saw Sarah. She walked towards him, and they met in the middle.

“Hi, Simon,” she smiled, and he got a good feeling, but decided to put that aside for right now.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Bad Feeling {Simon Story}

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    My thanks to King Tarzan for loaning me his characters and letting me in on a few of their secrets.

  2. A Bad Feeling {Simon Story}

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    It’s just not the sort of thing you say to impress a woman< great line.

  3. A Bad Feeling {Simon Story}

    Nick's Buddy Icon Nick

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Excellent prequel to the tale. Brilliant.

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