The Unwelcome Rest of an Endless Night

by uselessness

There they were, all in a row, the empty shells of five human bodies, unconscious, unfeeling, unaware.

Their peacefulness was unsettling. Had they no sense of how vulnerable they were? In the dark corner a shadow moved, and I saw the brief glint of a blade.

No. Please, no.

Someone was in the room with the family.

The figure stood, knife raised in the moonlight. One by one he circled the beds, watching each slumbering face. First, the children, two boys and their infant sister, and then the parents. I felt his gaze as it bore into each of them; I was a helpless observer as he brushed the sharpened steel gently across their cheeks. Preparing his strike.

I had been there before! It was happening again!

This same recurring dream, meaning… no… I was dreaming, I had slipped, I was asleep. Wake up! Wake up!

I pulled myself back into awareness for the third or fourth time that night—each awakening was harder than the last. By now my fatigue was a dull pain, that old familiar misery.

But to sleep… is to die.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. The Unwelcome Rest of an Endless Night

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Well, now I’m afraid to fall asleep too. Thanks a lot!

  2. The Unwelcome Rest of an Endless Night

    horrorfan13's Buddy Icon horrorfan13

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this, but it sort of reminds me of Nightmare on Elm Street.

  3. The Unwelcome Rest of an Endless Night

    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    omg scary

    the dream sequence you painted is very vivid i really like this

  4. The Unwelcome Rest of an Endless Night

    Mycroft's Buddy Icon Mycroft

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Gyah! This is very scary…I really like the “dull pain, that old familiar misery” line, though. Sounds like something out of a Nick Cave song.

  5. The Unwelcome Rest of an Endless Night

    Yeah Write!'s Buddy Icon Yeah Write!

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    woah! cool! i’ve had nights like this!

    to sleep is to die
    great final line

    personally, since i have no horror story talent, I would have entered this into yodaoncrack’s halloween ficlet challenge but this works both ways!

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