The Operative

by Howie Amourscow

There they were: benches, pigeons, the worn stones of the walk and the miraculous wall. He remembered all things wrong now; the orderly cards on file in his head irreversibly shuffled, but still knew this place – not because of all the hours here, but because the wall was a kindred soul.

Like him, it was alone. It persisted, impossibly poised, having miraculously survived the American bombs and Soviet shells that felled its companions. It only continued to exist because there was nothing else for it to do, a nuisance to be wished away as someone else’s problem.

He sat – on a Monday, the third bench from the corner – to wait. The wind rose; he pulled his coat close, wondered why it was terrycloth.

A stranger exited a cab and approached, familiar and foreign. He tried to match the face to a remembered file photo. Stasi?

“Papa, come.” Whoever he was, his German was excellent.

“I am meeting someone. Please go,” he replied curtly.

“Papa, they are waiting at the home. You shouldn’t do this.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Operative

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Tragically, beautifully sad.

  2. The Operative

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I didn’t get the terrycloth meaning until the end—very nicely done and as usual, wonderful descriptions. You have such a unique style.

  3. The Operative

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Lovely, always fun to have a little twist in reality. Easy to imagine the crusty old former agent still persisting in his ways.

  4. The Operative

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Once a spy always a spy. Great.

  5. The Operative

    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Interesting, well-crafted story.

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!