Antithesis

by tukituki

“I’ve never cared much for the Parasaurolophus,” Linda said as she walked down the bike corridor with her shaggy puppy, Antithesis. Antithesis kept prancing, nose to the ground. He was sick of Linda’s nonsense talk. Inane enough that he wanted to both ignore it and keep listening.
Linda did not love Antithesis, but she needed him. Feeling his tongue on her cheek or fur on her palm was Earth’s way of saying, “You are part of something, Linda. Something that makes sense.”
Little really made that much sense to Linda, but if she thought about that too much, she was sure she would shrivel.
So, instead, she lived a place where both fantastical creatures and creatures from the late cretaceous period lay on the grass while yellow Hibiscus flowers floated above their heads. Antithesis did not exist there, but the wetness of his tongue and softness of his fur were what separated Linda’s two worlds.
“Not the most attractive dino,” she continued, “plus baby centaur is terrified of him.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Antithesis

    WriterDan's Buddy Icon WriterDan

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Interesting idea, but mostly confusing.

  2. Antithesis

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I liked the ambiguity of reality vs. fantasy. Lots of possibilities, especially with the semi-sentient dog.

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m quite confused. Also, it would have been helpful to break the piece into paragraphs.

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