Peeping Tom

by N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)

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Olivia sat at her computer instant messaging her friends. It had been a normal day at school and all the girls were gossiping about some boy named Jake. Olivia didn’t have a clue who Jake really was but according to her friends he was sweet, strong, and hot. But he was also, smelly, perverted, and annoying. Olivia was the only one home because her mom worked late downtown. Her iTunes music blared over the speakers and she whispered the lyrics to herself.
For no reason she looked out the window. There peeking over the wood edge was a dirty, scruffy man. Screaming Olivia ran towards the unlocked front door. The man became alert and ran towards the door too, in hopes of getting inside. Luckily Olivia got to the door first, flipping the lock she sprinted to her phone. She dialed 911. Glancing nervously back out the window she watched as the man sprinted away from the house. His bedraggled hair flopped in the wind as he ran away. This had been a nightmare.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Peeping Tom

    N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)'s Buddy Icon N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)

    Posted about 1 year ago

    This is a true story. The girl is fine (her name is changed in the story) and she was safe. It reminded us all that, no matter how safe you think you are there could always be something bad around the corner

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    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I love the juxtaposition of the light and dark sides in this thriller! This was MY worst nightmare as a kid, someone watching in the window. Creepy!

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    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Oh god, that’s creepy, and also why I’m seriously OCD about locking doors.

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    Kiarra's Buddy Icon Kiarra

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    that is scary, u never know who is watching u

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 12 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    omg. true story. wow. creepy.
    this is kinda funny cuz it uses… uhmm.. a cough friend cough of mine’s name and my one guy friend name’s jake so i found this funny, placing the characters as if this happened hahaha. =]

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    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 3 months ago

    Scary scenario.. great use of my favorite word.. bedraggled, 5 stars.

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