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We've Been Waiting

by ballroomblitz

“Sam,” a voice called. “We’re coming for you”. Sam ran as fast as he could. But it didn’t matter how fast he ran. He could not escape the voices. “Sam,don’t be afraid”.
Sam’s feet pounded the pavement. He saw an old general store;the pale light coming from it’s porch. Once there, he grabbed the door knob. It slowly turned. Sam could not overcome the joy of it being unlocked. He walked in. It was pitch black. He found a flashlight next to the door.
“This seems too easy,” he said quietly to himself.
He shined the flashlight. Immediatly he saw the food aisle. He hadn’t eaten in over 24 hours, so he grabbed the food and started to dig in.
If Sam hadn’t been so hungry and scared, he may have noticed an old man sitting in the corner. The man slowly walked over to Sam. He put his hand on Sam’s shoulder. Sam screamed in fright. He looked up at the old man.
“I am so sorry I broke into your store,”Sam said.
The old man did not answer.
“I’ll be getting out now.”
“Oh no, Sam. We’ve been waiting.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. We've Been Waiting

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Hope you don’t mind that I wrote a sequel to your contest entry. Don’t know why—just did.

  2. We've Been Waiting

    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    this is great…the end is creepy…but just to be picky can you please change comming to coming

    im thingo about spelling lol….trust me..it will give you two extra characters!

  3. We've Been Waiting

    ballroomblitz's Buddy Icon ballroomblitz

    Posted about 1 year ago

    ya i knew something was wrong with that. i’m a bad speller. :) oh well, lol. i fixed it.

  4. We've Been Waiting

    BetwINeen's Buddy Icon BetwINeen

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    scary and suprising…good ficlet

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