Live?

by RunningWithScissors

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A pull at the end of the blood red ribbon woke me. Love, it seemed to whisper, hold on love.

I didn’t want to keep trying anymore, though. I wanted to slip away. To let the wind carry the last bit of ribbon of my life away with the wind. Awayy..

Another tug, this one more frantic than the last. The same lovely words woke me. “T-tom?” I stumbled. Who was Tom? What was Tom? Whoever.. whatever.. I need Tom rght now.

I slipped away again. Almost completely before something frigid pressed against my lips? lips, hmm. I like the taste of those. I sighed, “Tom, live..”

Huh, funny. I had meant to say love.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Live?

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love the first two paragraphs especially. This is really good.

  2. Live?

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yayy!i NOW LUV U CAUSE U SAVED HER !!yAYY!

  3. Live?

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oOo, nice job, verrry .. greatly [?] written =]

  4. Live?

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 7 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    as OTOC said, very greatly written….
    LoA

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