Broken Heart

by blueyedwonder

Lauri sprawled dolefully across her bed, sobbing quietly. Glayelle had silently driven her home with much bewitchment of the car, the whole time with a cynical, irate face, pursed lips and focused spell-beam eyes.

“All right,” said Glayelle assertively from the doorway, her hands on her hips. “Pack your charm, your mermyd armor, anything else you would want for a quest.”

Lauri looked up slowly, her swollen eyes uncomprehending. “Why?” she asked in a depressed monotone.

“Why do you think?” asked Glayelle, straightening her pillows and pushing in her desk chair. “We’re going after Matt, or Mohrak, or whatever you want to call him.”

“Why?” repeated Lauri in the same bored, dispirited tone.

“Because you love each other,” said Glayelle tartly. “Just because he’s being an idiot right now doesn’t mean you don’t love each other…Poseidon, if we stopped loving every time men were stupid, we’d all be single all our lives. Now get up!”

Stiffly, Lauri rose. “Fine. But don’t blame me when it turns sour.”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

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    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    write another one pls i read all of theese seires it is so awsome !!!!!!!!! make more pls !

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    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow this was rlly good. i like turning them into speices that hate each other. ill b watching for a sequel.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 9 months ago

    Personally, I appreciated the line about, ‘if we stopped loving every time men were stupid…’, cause frankly, we’re pretty stupid as a gender.

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    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    lol

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I really liked that Glayelle was so supportive of her friend, and of course, THX ’s comment.

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    curbxstomp's Buddy Icon curbxstomp

    Posted 8 months ago

    Hm. If I could write a good story in a specific order I would take example from you. However….if you haven’t noticed, my little merlin trilogy was like…not in order. But, I just wanted you to know that I adore your series! It’s amazing! Anyway, I want to see you on that most active list.
    curbxstomp

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