You Only Live Once

by insomniac

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“But I thought-”

“EH!”

“Wha-”

“EH!”

“Er-”

“Umph!”

“Erm-?”

“NO!”

Raychelle silently glared at her Aunt.

“Shelly,” Raychelle shuddered at the use of her Aunt’s nickname, “why don’t you invite someone over? We can go shopping!”

“No,” Raychelle groaned, annoyed by her Aunt’s perkiness, “I told you I hate shopping! When will it sink in?”

“You’re just as stuborn as your father was!” Her Aunt snapped, standing up.

At the mention of her father, Raychelle looked up. “Hmm?”

Her Aunt hurrumphed and trotted away.

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. You Only Live Once

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 12 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    A fun dynamic we get a glimpse of at the end there, but I was still left wondering what the grunting and erm-ing was about at the beginning.

  2. You Only Live Once

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    teen speak i think they grunt a lot. cool ficlet

  3. You Only Live Once

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hahha, the beginning conversation i could apply to pretty well =]

    nice ficlet, note me when/if u write a sequel, i wanta see where this goes =]

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