Into The Storm

by Howie Amourscow

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars' Buddy Icon Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love your take on Simon’s magic. It’s something I’ve always struggled with: how do you make the oftentimes dry rituals of ceremonial magick and make them as exciting as a Doctor Strange, and make it feel real at the same time? You’ve got writing magic down pat, Howie.
    And I swear you’re reading my mind; that Sharpie on the hand trick was something I thought of as well, but never got a chance to fit it in somewhere. Excellent work.

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    Nick's Buddy Icon Nick

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Excellent work, Howie. I have likewise always had trouble with writing the magic part, but you got it nailed down.

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 12 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I was impressed by the closing dialogue. That was quite an exchange.

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