Xaviers Pants Free Day in the Park

by BetwINeen

Even at the tender age of three Xavier had always been more adapt and precocious then other three year olds. He spoke in full sentences and unlike his classmates never ate paste.
And at this moment Xavier was fully aware that his pants were gone, off in the clutches of some older boy who thought it was funny that Xavier had no pants. He realized he was without any underwear and that everyone thought it was cute that he was naked in the sprinklers.
“Mooooom!”, he shrieked running towards the nearest tree for cover. He looked around, his face red and finally found her chatting with an older women wearing a strange rabbit fur coat. He ran over to her and quickly grabbed his jacket out of her hand.
“What’s wrong Xav-”, his mom started to say but couldn’t finish because she was laughing so hard.
“ITS NOT FUNNY !”, he screamed and started west, or was it east? towards home.
Xavier never really got over that humiliation, and stayed away from parks even when he was wearing underwear.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Xaviers Pants Free Day in the Park

    lost_at_sea's Buddy Icon lost_at_sea

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oh…..poor boy.
    I loved it.

    Just a few spelling corrections:
    You spelled “nearest” wrong. And at the beginning I believe it is “adept” instead of “adapt”.

    Great Ficlet despite the little errors (which can be fixed in seconds!)

  2. Xaviers Pants Free Day in the Park

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 12 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    if he’s so smart, how did he get naked? did he voluntarily do it? why? I bet he’ll never do it again!!

  3. Xaviers Pants Free Day in the Park

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 12 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    nice, but i’m agreeing with mistress elsha hawk—how did he get naked? :$

  4. Xaviers Pants Free Day in the Park

    BetwINeen's Buddy Icon BetwINeen

    Posted 12 months ago

    i don’t really have a concise explination but i’m thinking a really mean “older” kid pulled down his pants and stole them…lol

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