A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight

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Girl and Guy stood somewhere in Montana, surrounded by trees and snow and trees…and snow…and…um…and trees, and snow….and….Oh whatever it was just trees and snow, ok? Just trees, and snow. That’s all. Nothing else. Nothing. Nada. Kaput. Comprende?!!??!?

Girl suddenly started. “Did you hear that?” she asked Guy, who shrugged and continued trying to put on his shirt, which for some reason didn’t want to go on. “I heard something! Someone crying, or something..” A noise came through the trees. “Heeelp…..meeeee….”
Girl and Guy ran through the trees towards the noise. And what did they find there, lo and behold?

pause for dramatic tension

Hannah Montana, the “teen pop sensation”, lying pregnant in the snow!

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 12 months ago

    Did she try to elope too??

  2. A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight

    Insert Pen Name Here 's Buddy Icon Insert Pen Name Here

    Posted 12 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    Not really…you’ll see!

  3. A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight

    Spring Chicken's Buddy Icon Spring Chicken

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    haha this is so random and funny and weird!! i love it!!

  4. A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    My favorite line :
    Girl suddenly started. “Did you hear that?” she asked Guy, who shrugged and continued trying to put on his shirt, which for some reason didn’t want to go on.
    HAHAHA !More I demand!More! lol

  5. A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight

    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 9 months ago

    haha, trees and snow

    you’ve done montana literary justice : D

  6. A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight

    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 9 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Hahaha. Again, liked the first paragraph.

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