Nightmare

by someday_93

It wasn’t that the dream itself was so scary. When we wake up, we often find that our worst nightmares are really not so intensely frightening as we had thought when we were asleep. It was more that the dream was so vivid. It had felt so real. It was one of those dreams where you wake up wondering, wait a minute, what am doing here?

She gently fingers the plaid flannel of her bedsheets, still in that shocked state between dreaming and being awake. She is a little bit dizzy, her breathing a little bit jagged.

“Just a dream,” she whispers softly, for only her own ears to hear. “Just a dream.”

The luminous red letters on the digital clock she keeps by her bed read 1:07. I still have time to go back to sleep, she thinks drowsily, letting her eyes fall shut. But as soon as she drifts into dreamland, for the second time tonight, the nightmare returns.

Tossing, turning, the dream controls her body in a way she did not think was possible. A scream erupts from her throat, waking her; her eyelids flutter open.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Nightmare

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wake up! [wake up, on a saturday night.. could be new york, maybe hollywood.. hahha hilary duff.]

  2. Nightmare

    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted 12 months ago

    Ew, that happened to me last night. Stupid Ghost Hunters marathons. Liked the story, but the ending seemed a little awkward to me.

  3. Nightmare

    That Girl's Buddy Icon That Girl

    Posted 12 months ago

    I am agreeing with Batak Beatrix, in that the ending was a little out of place. It has such a flow to it, I feel like that last sentence just doesn’t belong.

    But I really liked it. It’s exactly how you feel when you keep having bad dreams.

  4. Nightmare

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 12 months ago

    Is this any better?

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