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Aphenosmphobia and Hannah

by BetwINeen

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“Don’t touch me!”, Hannah pulled back roughly from the strangers light touch.
“Sorry Ma’m I just wanted to give you your recpiet”, the cashier said, putting the offending piece of paper on the counter.
Hannah took the recipet and signed it quickly, taking her grocrceries and walking quickly out of the store.
She contemplated when really she had started to get aphenphosmphobia, really a fear of being touched.
Suddenly a stranger lightly bumped into her.
She started to panic and ran all the way to her apartment, not caring about the apple that fell from the grocery bag, just concentrating on getting to her aprtment and being safe from all those hands and limbs that could get to her.
Quickly she locked the door and put away the groceries, sighing and starting to calm down.
She was safe now.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Aphenosmphobia and Hannah

    Maybe_Miseryx's Buddy Icon Maybe_Miseryx

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    this is nicely written. i like it :]

  2. Aphenosmphobia and Hannah

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    paranoid much =]

  3. Aphenosmphobia and Hannah

    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    nice job
    you seem to capture the paranoia of the women well

    thanks for entering

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