Just.. Just Stop It Okay?! [Haiku Challenge]

by One Time, One Chance

I scream, but you just
Hurting me. Sorry, I thought
Somebody loved me.

You hurt me some more
Though what did I do to you?
Why won’t you just stop?

I beg and I plead
But the hurt continues, I
Can’t stand too much more.

How much longer I
Can stand this pain, I’m dying
On outside and in.

Your finally done
And you walk away, I hope
God punishes you.

For I am one of
God’s daughters, he shall bring you
Pain in every way.

Emotionally,
Physically, the list goes
On, for your mistake.

Hope you learn.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Just.. Just Stop It Okay?! [Haiku Challenge]

    JacK Spicer!'s Buddy Icon JacK Spicer!

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice haiku…so how does this challange work?

  2. Just.. Just Stop It Okay?! [Haiku Challenge]

    JonasBrothersLova148's Buddy Icon JonasBrothersLova148

    Posted 11 months ago

    that sounds like:

    “That’s a great idea!!!!!!!!” (or alteat what you said WAS the good idea!)

    ” (insert name here), It hurts!”

    LMAO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  3. Just.. Just Stop It Okay?! [Haiku Challenge]

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 11 months ago

    lol jonasbrotherslova, nobody hasta kno about tht!!!!!!!!!! ty!!!!!!!!!!
    soo just.. shh!!!! =o

  4. Just.. Just Stop It Okay?! [Haiku Challenge]

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 11 months ago

    you need 2 more

  5. Just.. Just Stop It Okay?! [Haiku Challenge]

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 11 months ago

    oops, didn’t see tht.. i changed it =]

  6. Just.. Just Stop It Okay?! [Haiku Challenge]

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, you went above and beyond! I counted seven…
    wow.
    very good

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