Seen And Not Seen

by Howie Amourscow

“I refuse to be ignored!” I shout at the clerk behind the glass. He doesn’t look up. I slam my hand down; it hurts. The clerk glances at my hand and goes back to what he was doing.

“Didja hear me!” I yell, no, I shriek. I put my face up against the tiny gap where you slide paperwork through. “I won’t be ignored!”

The clerk’s manager appears from a back room, smoothing his oiled black hair with one hand. At last. Some damn service around here. It’s about time.

“Is there a problem, Smith?” the manager says.

“Your clerk won’t fill my request,” I say, face still pressed to the slot.

“No sir, no problem at all,” the clerk says.

“Oh,” the manager replies, “then carry on.” The manager begins walking away.

“He acts like I’m not even here,” I plead at his back. He turns.

“Oh, Smith, by the way, you can take your break in fifteen,” he says, and walks away.

I turn to face the others in line. “What is wrong with this place?” I say in supplication. They all look around, anywhere but directly in front of them.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Seen And Not Seen

    Howie Amourscow's Buddy Icon Howie Amourscow

    Posted 10 months ago

    (Title borrowed from Talking Heads.)

  2. Seen And Not Seen

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 10 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    reminds me of a Twilight Zone episode, from the newer series in the 90’s. Or maybe it was Outer Limits. Either way, a very distressing situation.

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