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Emma Five

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I have to go pick up Minnie and Mickey now. They live next door and are taken care of by a stupid nanny named Carmela (yeah, I know) who refuses to drop them off when her shift is over. SHE IS JUST THE …grr. Gotta calm down!
I half to get everyone into coats and hats and gloves and walk them all the way next door and get M&M and their stroller and get them home through the snow. Grrr…

Later- Kids asleep

Oh my god, I REVERE naptime! Everyone except Lia is asleep: M&M in their crib, Kyle and Teddy on the beds, and me on the couch. Haha, I’m not asleep. Lia’s on the computer again, though I know that soon she will take back all of her furious proclamations that Naptime Is For Babies and fall asleep on the couch. Whoops, I’m on the couch! Better move…

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Emma Five

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    named instead of “name”
    have instead of “half”

    don’t completely understand the way you say you “revere naptime” I don’t know if that’s the right word choice.

    hope you don’t get discouraged by my comments, I don’t mean to be rude, I just want to help ameliorate your writing. ♥

  2. Emma Five

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    i really appreciate the constructive critisism, im only 13 so thats super useful. Btw, what does ameliorate mean? I love words and if i see one i dont know, i just half to know what it means! Oops, there i go again with half, its a habit of mine, ill fix it. also fixing name, which was a stupid mistake. Thanks!

  3. Emma Five

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Ameliorate means to improve or make better.

    By the way, what exactly does “revere” mean?

  4. Emma Five

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    thanks! Revere means to worship, or think very highly of. usually used in reference to God, like I revere you, god, but in this case it’s naptime. :)

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