Autumn Inside {Haiku Challenge}

by Alexa ♥

Leaves begin to find
New colors hidden inside
Inspiring us all.

Bright colors shine
Stormy day’s foggy grayness
Can’t hide their color.

All things one day die
Today’s brightness will become
Naked branches soon.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Autumn Inside {Haiku Challenge}

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 10 months ago

    I realize Haiku are supposed to involve a flower, but honestly, in Autumn in New England – the leaves look like flowers.
    ~
    Besides, I did remember to involve a season.

  2. Autumn Inside {Haiku Challenge}

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The imagery is just beautiful in this poem. Nice!

  3. Autumn Inside {Haiku Challenge}

    Mycroft's Buddy Icon Mycroft

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very colourful! I love autumn, especially when the leaves are still crispy – these haiku give a great impression of what the whole season feels like.

  4. Autumn Inside {Haiku Challenge}

    Dana ♥'s Buddy Icon Dana ♥

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it! I really like autumn too. When I was little I would have my sis rake the leaves and when she wasnt looking I would mess them up again. . .

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