Because... (Haiku Challenge)

by Ana Cristina

Because you left me
the rain hangs teardrops on trees
and night is too long.

Because you’re absent
my thoughts and dreams are vacant
and the sky is dead.

Black leaves swirl aimless
in the white vacuum of night:
because you are gone.

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  1. Because... (Haiku Challenge)

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awesome. It’s as though she sees these naturally occuring things as nature’s reaction to her loneliness that this guy left her.

  2. Because... (Haiku Challenge)

    Yeah Write!'s Buddy Icon Yeah Write!

    Posted 11 months ago

    really, i’m very jealous! this is very well written (as all of your ficlets are)

  3. Because... (Haiku Challenge)

    Mycroft's Buddy Icon Mycroft

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oooh…not only is that beautifully written, you also got nature references into all three. Major haiku-cred there!

  4. Because... (Haiku Challenge)

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 11 months ago

    Merci beaucoup! :)

  5. Because... (Haiku Challenge)

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow!!Amazing…..(eyes in open wonderment)

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