Sometimes They Do Come Out At Night

by kwatz

High in the night sky, the moon finally shed her cloud cover and began to illuminate the diaphanous fog. The pale sheen of weak light struggled to penetrate into the watery darkness below.

Is it enough? they thought.

The conflict raged. Some pressed for release. Others urged caution. All along, the hunger grew.

No. The time is not right. We do not come out at night.

Above, shuffling footsteps echoed through the darkness, off the mossy stones, to the depths. Once confident, they began to move slower and slower. Below, they could hear haggard breathing growing louder and louder.

It comes!

The footsteps stopped and the night held its breath.

A water-gatherer!

Excitement rippled through the colony.

Now! Now?

Hesitation.

Indecision. Indecision. Uncertainty ruled. Hunger insisted. Then, for the briefest of moments the fog broke and the inside of the well was illuminated. A feeling of triumph surged through their shared minds!

The moon is bright. Night flees before us!

We go!

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Sometimes They Do Come Out At Night

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oooh, rock on! A very sequel to give the other point of view on the matter, and a lovely explanation of why they don’t come out at night but did on this one occasion. And whoa, impressive vocabulary usage.

  2. Sometimes They Do Come Out At Night

    Wil Wheaton's Buddy Icon Wil Wheaton

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very, very cool. I am so happy that my story inspired you to write this! I loved the tone, the different point of view, and the extra dimension you added to the world.

  3. Sometimes They Do Come Out At Night

    kwatz's Buddy Icon kwatz

    Posted 8 months ago

    Thank you both for your compliments.

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