You tell me

by Never Explain

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I didn’t know exactly where she would be in New York, I called her, she said she was in our neighborhood about two minutes ago! Now she’s saying she’s in California!
“Seriously, where are we going to meet?” I asked.
“I don’t know, where do you want to meet?” She asked back.
I knew she was toying with me by the sound of her voice.
“Where are you staying?”
“Beach house.”
“A beach house where?”
“California.”
“Damn it! Please, just give me the address!”
There was a moment’s pause then she gave the address.
179 Red Sand Lane
San Fransisco California
“How am I supposed to find this place?” I asked.
“Once again, you tell me.”
She hung up.
God damn it.

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

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    The 13 Year-Old's Buddy Icon The 13 Year-Old

    Posted 10 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    first off, remember to click on mature but to help your writing, (correct me if im wrong because im only 12) i would say that It’s ok to just say “said” after or before speech its ok to spice it up a bit using words like demanded, but dont make it a hobby

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    RunningWithScissors' Buddy Icon RunningWithScissors

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    !!!!!
    by far one of your best. :D
    you really show that they’ve changed. toms not as patient. and cyn’s almost looking for trouble. :]]]]
    iloveee you.
    ^^user 5927. mature pieces dont get read. and when i was twleve… i heard the word f* like everyday in my school haha… sorrayy

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    RunningWithScissors' Buddy Icon RunningWithScissors

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    holyy shitt. i said iloveyou. lmao.
    i meant ilove the text. hahahahha. sorry had a certain someone on muh mind. 0:]

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    baha, stupid tom =]
    ~
    LMAO ! very smooth hopeless =]
    and to user 5927, i’m twelve too, and [i agree wit hopeless] i hear words like dat used daily.

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    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted 9 months ago

    Wow, you guys are all 12…I’m not, I just thought I should say that you’re right about mature stories not getting read…That’s my problem, most of the time.
    I love this series, guys. It reminds me so much of my current relationship.

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    emma jo_234's Buddy Icon emma jo_234

    Posted 6 months ago

    shes bein difficult

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