Right Now{i'm not that girl's first 50 ficlet challenge}

by Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3

I stared blankly at my computer screen. Looking down at the keyboard, each letter having its own button. I was writing something for a challenge, it was interesting, creative. The index cards were neatly piled except for a few stray ones.
I looked down at my bracelets each one with its own meaning and color.
The lamp gave a dim light, like a flickering candle.
The mouse pad was a famous painting.
It inspires me, the two fingers almost touching.
I lean back in my chair, wondering what to write.
I wanted it to be creative, I wanted people to read it.
You can always talk,
but sometimes people don’t listen.
That pisses me off.
You don’t want to see me angry,
it can get nasty quickly!

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 2.5 stars out of 5

  1. Right Now{i'm not that girl's first 50 ficlet challenge}

    `espressotherapy.'s Buddy Icon `espressotherapy.

    Posted about 1 year ago

    wow, love the concept of this! brilliant.

  2. Right Now{i'm not that girl's first 50 ficlet challenge}

    SupRspi's Buddy Icon SupRspi

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Interesting concept. It’s hard to put things you see right in front of you at your computer into a story sometimes. You did a good job, although the fragmentation at the end distracted me, as intentional as it seems.

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