Happiness Over [scw(bd)ow's challenge]

by One Time, One Chance

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I lay down in my room, and begin reading The Wedding Planner’s Daughter. After meerly a few pages of reading, the storyline catches up to me. I went from a bored mood to an extremely giddy mood. Realizing my mood, I decide to listen to Me and You by Fall Out Boy on my iPod.

Once I have that playing, I begin searching for a picture of Pete Wentz – just about the hottest guy in the world – so I could replay the video in my head.

Once the songs over, I’m just about in tears. I knew the video by heart, and it gets me crying every time. Wiping away my tears, I decide to go outside. Switching back to my giddy mood, I start dancing around in the grass. Suddenly, I trip and fall, my head being slammed into the grass. Laughing it off, I lift my head to see a four-leaf clover. I pick it, and pick a three-leaf one, put it together to see BAM – a seven-leaf clover!

Just then, my little brother comes skipping out, “Ding fries are done, ding fries are done..”

Sigh. Happiness over.

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Happiness Over [scw(bd)ow's challenge]

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 10 months ago

    haha, sorry this is reallllllllly bad

  2. Happiness Over [scw(bd)ow's challenge]

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 10 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    ding fries are done Funny ending.. Family Guy Fan!

  3. Happiness Over [scw(bd)ow's challenge]

    SupRspi's Buddy Icon SupRspi

    Posted 10 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I wouldn’t call it bad. I’d call it in need of a little direction and editing. The story itself, catching a piece in time of an adolescent girl, is actually pretty good.

    Some simple editing and this is a solid four star entry. We get just enough to give us some idea of who the girl is, but not so much that future ficleteers would be turned off writing a sequel or prequel simply because too much info is presented and they can’t fit in their own vision.

  4. Happiness Over [scw(bd)ow's challenge]

    Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3's Buddy Icon Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3

    Posted 10 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    it was a little random, but hey i liked the falling thing, idid it in basketball practice once, it was the weirdest thing!creative

  5. Happiness Over [scw(bd)ow's challenge]

    llamaluvsmenotu's Buddy Icon llamaluvsmenotu

    Posted 9 months ago

    omg that video is really sad ; (

    p.s. SupRspi – you talk too much…; )

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