Advent

by Ana Cristina

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    Nick's Buddy Icon Nick

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, I found typo… In Blake’s final sentence there should be the word “Hammer” before “time.” :)

    Blake looks stylin’ in those parachute pants he has.

    Great continuation of the tale, by the way. Of course, now we’ve got another POV to play with…

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    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Lillith is such a fun being. She is victim, evil, good… All in the eyes of the beholder. Love the integration of her into this story.

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    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    LOL at Nick’s comment – it would take a whole other ficlet to explain why Blake had suddenly decided it was indeed Hammer Time
    would have made the series all the more interesting lol

    and LOVE the other POV Ana – this is really great

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 10 months ago

    Thanks for the comments, and I almost died laughing when I read your comment, Nick. I look forward to seeing where the series goes now. And discovering what Lilith has up her sleeve, er, wing. >:)

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was just elegant and graceful. I felt like I was soaring as I read it.
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    Oh, and the Hammer Time comment, of course, was priceless.

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