In A Moment

by butterflygirl6106

He glanced across the room at me, chills ran up my legs. He walk as if towards me and I shutterd to think what he would do if he knew I was following him. I gasped as he walk pass me as if in relief to the almost akward misteak. I left the coffee shop only to look over my shoulders in the dark.

I trun the cornner and and ran towards my car, what was I thinking and what could he have thought I was doing. I drove off and stop the car at the cornner then as I look at the car pulling up next to me I saw the glimpse of his eyes, I did not know what this was about nor at this moment did I care, I remember why I followed him into that coffee shop and at that moment I knew I had to know if he felt what I felt also. I got out of the car and walked over to driver side of the car it was late and no traffic on the streets. He rolled down the window and in a very husky voice said to me, you felt it to? I smiled and said this was ment to be and the rest was left in the night.

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  1. In A Moment

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    A lot of grammar issues, but great so far!

  2. In A Moment

    RunningWithScissors' Buddy Icon RunningWithScissors

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    i really like the last part. it made me smile and giggle this.
    something so magically ridiculous you just have to believe in this feeling that cuts across coffee shops in husky voices.
    fkhdsfkjdsfkjdsfdsfljdsfdsf. im rambling,, sorry.

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