Confrontation

by SKermitgorf

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“Cee, Cee, What are you doing here so early,” Lucy said.

“I don;t know how to say this, but, my mom saw your car speed away, after my dog Cotton was hit, know anything about that?,” I said impatiently.

“Cee, Cee, I can explain.. I didn’t mean it, I was drinking, I know that doesn’t excuse it. I was scared, please don’t tell Joe,...I..,” Lucy began to cry right there on their front porch.

I felt like a heel. Wait she killed my dog!!!

I hauled off and punched her in the face with my best non-girlies right hook. My fist crashed into her nose, blood sprayed all over their white front door.

Walking down the path , I turned to her and said, “That was for Cotton.” And I walked away crying.

Joe came up the path, looked at me, looked at his sister, and he knew that I knew his sister killed my dog.

“Cee Cee,” Joe said, ” I swear I didn’t know about it until you’re mom described the car. I’m so sorry.” He offered me his shoulder to cry on and I never felt closer to anyone in my life.

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  1. Confrontation

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh wow. Didn’t see punching Lucy coming…nice job!

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    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with Someday.

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    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    very nice. I was thinking, yano, maybe they could talk? lol or not. I like how you had Cee Cee punch Lucy and had Joe give Cee Cee a sholder to cry on.

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    artistsrunwild's Buddy Icon artistsrunwild

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Kermit

    These are great…you really have teenage girl getting mad down to a tee :P

    but can we please fix the spelling mistakes in the second para – the random ; and anything

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    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    baha! she punched her.. i thought after seeing a girl older than u cry tht u wuldn’t punch her of all things, but i guess not..

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