Remember

by SunEyedGirl

Remember when we were under the stars
And that air smelled so crisp
You looked me in my eyes and I wanted you so badly to kiss my lips… but you didn’t
I never stopped wondering why you didn’t

Remember when you held my hips and pulled me close
When I stared into your eyes and knew we were thinking the same thing

Remeber when we would talk on the phone, and you would laugh, I got chills
When we told each other our plans for ourselves
How big we all dream

When I couldn’t breathe when I couldn’t speak
Do you remember when you thought I was beautiful?
remember when we were on top of the world
the night I met you and we walked together feeling the rush as we walked through the neighbors back yards

Remember when I actually thought you would call
Remember when I actually though this would last
I guess this is gonna hurt

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Remember

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    sad & bueatiful at the same time,wonderful combination, should be a song.

  2. Remember

    The Ghost in the Machine's Buddy Icon The Ghost in the Machine

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thats good. u captured the feelings well this has happened 2me a few times

  3. Remember

    SocccerISmyLIFE's Buddy Icon SocccerISmyLIFE

    Posted 9 months ago

    Pretty good. It has that sad beautiful thing going like Kermitgorf said. Captures the feeling well.

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