No He Wouldn't

by Flute Loop<33

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Before Jaylease could get the last word out, she was on the floor. She went to feel her head, but before her hand got there, something else did. Darkness fell apon her as the pain slowly faded as she blacked out.

When Jaylease started to come around, she didn’t know what to think. Actually, yes she did. How long had she been out? What had happened? She thought she had saw someone before she had lost consciousness, she thought it was her…. no that couldn’t be. He wouldn’t do that to her. Would he? No he wouldn’t.

Finally Jaylease remembered to open her eyes… She was shocked. No way. This could NOT be happening. How could she be here. Here. Her dad’s house.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. No He Wouldn't

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This reminds me of one of those dreams where things get really crazy and you want to wake up and can’t get the alarm to agree it’s time to get up… I like it!

  2. No He Wouldn't

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    nice job =) i like it

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