Best Job in the World

by horrorfan13

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  1. Best Job in the World

    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted about 1 year ago

    “Jolly Fat Man Day” is hilarious and very creative. :)

  2. Best Job in the World

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    hahahhahaha this is hilarious=]

  3. Best Job in the World

    SupRspi's Buddy Icon SupRspi

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I think you need a ” at the end of the second line. But otherwise, great story.

    I would have liked a little more whitespace to make the story easier to read, but that’s just me bing nitpicky.

    The idea is good, fairly well realized. While I don’t agree with one of your characters arguments the fact that I realize that means the conversation seemed ‘real’ to me.

    Makes me think of something friends and I would chat about after a few drinks.

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