Unravelled

by MeAndTheMoon

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You’re unraveling all the plasticity in my brain.
You put in the thoughts but it’s still me who feels insane.
I dread every encounter that goes by
It’s supposed to feel good when someone makes you fly.
I am afraid and weakened and you know it so well
There isn’t a sign but I’m ready to sell
And you don’t even give me an asking price
Just take what you want at the roll of a dice
And I get no choice, decision or care
Because wherever you want me, I’m already there

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Unravelled

    iammrwright's Buddy Icon iammrwright

    Posted 11 months ago

    pretty good. There is a spelling error in your first line though…I assume you meant “in my brain” rather than “in by brain”.

    yes, I’m one of those people who feels compelled to correct spelling errors on the internet.

    sorry.

  2. Unravelled

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Haha, iammrwright, so am I. I guess we’re both just weird like that.
    —
    Very nice poem! I liked it.

  3. Unravelled

    MeAndTheMoon's Buddy Icon MeAndTheMoon

    Posted 11 months ago

    thanks i hate spelling errors and i’m a horrible typist so i need all the help i can get

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