Nice addition of a flashback, then BAM right back into the story line. Thanks for adding! LoA
Nice addition of a flashback, then BAM right back into the story line. Thanks for adding!
LoA
Whoa! Who is Jake, I thought he was named John.
It’s Jake O’Neil and John Marshall. But I guess he’s mostly called O’Neil in this story :)
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