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Finding a Way Out

‘Where am I?’ Abbie thought when she awoke. She looked beside her and saw Alexia. “Alexia?” She whispered. “Alexia, wake up.”
Alexia groaned quietly as she slowly woke up. “Where are we?” She asked.
“I’m not sure. All I remember is we were on a walk and some monster type thing came out of no where and attacked us. We must be in it’s cave.” Abbie answered thoughtfully.
“We have to find a way out of here.” Said Alexia fearfully. “And we need to do it before that thing comes back.”
Abbie nodded in agreement. Just beyond them they saw a dark tunnel. It was just tall enough for them to stand up and walk.
“Let’s try this tunnel to see where it leads…but we have to be quiet in case that thing is still here.” Abbie said calmly.
“Lead the way.” Alexia said.
They followed the tunnel until they came to a big opening in the cave. Before entering it they looked around cautiously for the beast. When they saw that it appeared to be clear, they walked on to the next dark tunnel.

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uselessness
Posted 11 months ago

I like it! Nice transition from a straight horror to more of an adventure story. :-)
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Lone Writer
Posted 11 months ago

I LOVE IT !!
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Hunting Beauty
Posted 11 months ago

Thanks guys. I’m extremely excited to be on ficlets…it has really improved my writing skills. Tho it would be nice if ppl would make sequels to my ficlets tho…I think it would make it a lot more interesting…don’t u guys think so?
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Blossom Ruoqen
Posted 11 months ago

This is good so far, keep it up!
Some background information about the girls, why they were taking a walk, etc. would build more dimension for your ficlets. : ))
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Hunting Beauty
Posted 11 months ago

Thanks…I’ll remember that for the next prequel I make.