The Back of My Head Can't Be Very Attractive

by curbxstomp

I could feel the kid staring at the back of my head, and I didn’t know whether or not to be annoyed or flattered. He wasn’t bad looking, but at the same time, no one ever said it was a good idea to get involved with a good looking guy—that’s almost a bad idea, if you look at my family history. I kept glancing at the clock unconciously. Ten minutes left of class, and I was wondering when he was going to talk to me again. Did I really want to talk to him? I tried to comb my fingers through the knots in my hair, realizing it was a losing battle and settling back in my seat. Hopefully he didn’t mind. If he did, I might need to find a brush. Looking decent for the locals might be a good idea.

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  1. The Back of My Head Can't Be Very Attractive

    StrugglingWriter's Buddy Icon StrugglingWriter

    Posted 8 months ago

    I like the first person point of view here a lot. Well written.

  2. The Back of My Head Can't Be Very Attractive

    RunningWithScissors' Buddy Icon RunningWithScissors

    Posted 8 months ago

    good job. :]

  3. The Back of My Head Can't Be Very Attractive

    curbxstomp's Buddy Icon curbxstomp

    Posted 8 months ago

    Thanks guys. I really appreciate it. I am trying to find all of y’alls ficlets at the moment…should be paying attention in engineering….

  4. The Back of My Head Can't Be Very Attractive

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 8 months ago

    LOL . I like this…

  5. The Back of My Head Can't Be Very Attractive

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Like how it’s all done in thoughts all the action. well done.

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