The Choice

by User 6421

He didn’t know what to say. His mind raced, his heart beated, sweat building up slowly. He didn’t know what to say. Deep down, he knew that he had always liked her, and they were meant to be together, but there was something about Madison. Well, honestly there wasn’t. He liked her a little, but he liked her Isabella alot more. He could live just looking in her eyes, remain completely happy talking to her on the phone for hours, days. But now he had to make a choice. He couldn’t stand hurting her again, he hated the pain he had caused her, and hated the pain he felt inside when he thought about it.But could he really pass up another chance with her? Look at her standing there, here eyes so pretty, sparkling lightly from the tears covering them, her face frowning at him, but still looking amazing, her hair soft and majestic-like. He knew what he should do. It might cause her pain now, but he couldn’t stand to hurt her again like he knew he would. “I’m sorry Isabella, I don’t feel the same about you.”

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  1. The Choice

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    Posted 11 months ago

    ok first ‘here eyes so pretty’ should be her, and in the 5thish sentece I don’t think there should be a ‘her’ there. ‘her Isabella’? and I think it;d be easier to read with paragraphs. The fourth from last sentence, in my opinion, is just to long.. I think it should be divided up into 2 sentences. again this is all just my opinion. ((besides the misspelling))

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    Posted 10 months ago

    omg i luv this! please write a sequel! and i dont think its very hard to read. i think its awesome!!! pleaseeeeeee write a sequellll!

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