laughing

by skylar

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They were so young they didnt know better

. They thought that the world was still on there side.

I wish i could tell them what was going to happen.
How the world was going to turn .
But they just sat there laughing.

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. laughing

    User 6484's Buddy Icon User 6484

    Posted about 1 year ago

    i really liked it but you really had to concentrate to tell what you were trying to say

  2. laughing

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Wow. Very nice.

  3. laughing

    blackbearsrock's Buddy Icon blackbearsrock

    Posted about 1 year ago

    that was good, but next time you should add a little more- but overall it was great

  4. laughing

    Overlooked_Merchandise's Buddy Icon Overlooked_Merchandise

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    it was cute and if you think about it you’re right. the world has change and kids nowadays should understand that. very nice.

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