Meeting Snap

by Lone Writer

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I stared at him. What does he want?
“Are you having trouble with your locker?” he asked, his voice deep and rumbling.
“Um, yeah.” I really need to stop doing that.
“Here let me help you.” He reached over and spun in the combination then, hit the door with his fist. He pulled on the handle and it popped open.
I was surprised. “How did you know my combination?”
He grinned. “This used to be my locker. I’m Snap by the way, Sophmore.” he stuck out a hand.
“I’m Marianne, Freshman.” I shook it. “But everyone calls me Mary. Your name is Snap?”
“Yeah.”
My mind blanked. “Um, well thanks for your help.”
“Anytime. I’m always around, if you need me just snap.” Then he was gone.
Well that was interesting.
I shoved my stuff in my locker, and closed it to find Dylan standing behind the door.
“You were talking to Snap.” he stated.
“Um, yeah.” I NEED to stop that!
“He never talks to anyone, he’s like, the school mystery.” Dylan said looking at me in awe.
“Oh. Well he only helped me with my locker.”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Meeting Snap

    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted 10 months ago

    Haha, his name is Snap. I am officially amused by this fact.

  2. Meeting Snap

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 10 months ago

    gasp!
    haha i love that name – snap. very.. odd?

  3. Meeting Snap

    Tad Winslow's Buddy Icon Tad Winslow

    Posted 10 months ago

    I liked how Dylan described Snap as “the school mystery.” and the internal thoughts of the main character are funny.

  4. Meeting Snap

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    Posted 10 months ago

    wow, i deffinatly like the name snap.
    5*’s

  5. Meeting Snap

    lilly <3's Buddy Icon lilly <3

    Posted 10 months ago

    i like snap….sounds kool

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    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is awesome!

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    lost_at_sea's Buddy Icon lost_at_sea

    Posted 10 months ago

    I like hearing Mary’s thoughts. Well written and mysterious.

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