Just To Talk

by One Time, One Chance

Add to AIMShare

On my way home, it started to drizzle. Putting up my hood, I feel a vibration in my pocket. I take it out to find a text message from Chad.

=’(

I take it your sad?

Sad. Mad. ..suicidal..

CHAD !!!

haha. i’m not that depressed, i was just playin.

wht happend?

( Bryn dumped me. =’(

“Yessssss!” I yelled into the pouring rain.

Awww! I sorry. =[

It’s fine. Now I have you.

I stopped walking and stared at the screen, my heart pounding. Now he has me for what?

I mean, who else am I going to talk to? The guys won’t listen to me, I can tell you that.

I started walking again.

Right. Yeah, i kno wht u mean.

I knew u wuld :-)

I reached my house, slammed the front door and all but ran up to my room. I slammed my door too, and threw the phone onto my bed.

“Who else am I gonna talk to, huh?! Well, let’s see how well you can talk to me when I’m with my boyfriend!!”

I picked up my phone.

Prequels

Write a prequel

Sequels

Write a sequel

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Just To Talk

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 10 months ago

    So she’s gonna go out with Derick? It’s kinda obnoxious that Chad would just assume she’ll go with him now…come on, keep writing!

  2. Just To Talk

    someday_93's Buddy Icon someday_93

    Posted 10 months ago

    Oops, I forgot.
    ~
    5 stars!

  3. Just To Talk

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 10 months ago

    really cool use of text messaging in the story, rather than face2face conversation, a modern twist

  4. Just To Talk

    Mr Reeses 's Buddy Icon Mr Reeses

    Posted 10 months ago

    i like it, especially tha text message twist

  5. Just To Talk

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 10 months ago

    The best part was showing how she felt compared to what she wrote in the text message. Great emotion.

  6. Just To Talk

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 10 months ago

    yeah what they said.. lol very nice. 5*’s

Want to comment on this ficlet? You need to sign in!