I Love You (continued)

by lena

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I always said I love you,
you always said “I love you too.”
I really don’t know why I try,
cuz this was all just a lie.
you already moved on, I wish I could
I’d give you the world, I really would.
But still the world turns,
and my heart burns.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. I Love You (continued)

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted about 1 year ago

    this was nice, and had a good rhythm to it, 5*’s!!!

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    theworldscrewedmeover's Buddy Icon theworldscrewedmeover

    Posted 12 months ago

    love it
    and funny thing about it
    is i’m feeling that way right now.
    thx for showing me i’m not alone.

  3. I Love You (continued)

    lena's Buddy Icon lena

    Posted 12 months ago

    nobody is ever alone

  4. I Love You (continued)

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like it… it’s very nice…

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    Annie_Bear's Buddy Icon Annie_Bear

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow, I never really knew how talented you were till now. We need to hang out more. lol

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