My Shoes

by .:band baby:.

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There they were. I see them. Exactly the pair of shoes I’ve been looking all over town for. I walk towards them casually. Another women beats me to them. Oh well, were probably not the same size.

Both of us are seaching through the racks to find the size we want. Aha! Found them. I reach out to grab the pair in my size. The only pair. Just as I get my hand on the box the other lady grabs hold too. Oh great..

“S’cuse me Miss. I think I had these first.” I say politly.

“Oh. I don’t think you did, lady. I was pulling these off the shelf before you even saw them.” She replies.

“Ma’am. I’m sorry, but you’re mistaken. These are mine..” I tell her, ever so sweetly.
“No, you didn’t.” She says yanking them out of my hand.

“Okay, look. I have been all over town today looking for these shoes. Can I please just have them?” I say, dropping all signs of being nice.

“Nope.” She kept walking.

I couldn’t believe her. I had those first. And they were 75% off too. A steal! The nerve of some people.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. My Shoes

    Algai 'd' Aman's Buddy Icon Algai 'd' Aman

    Posted 9 months ago

    Perfect Black friday-ish story.

  2. My Shoes

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 9 months ago

    hahhahaha
    “those shoes are myne, betch!” [hahaaha kelly]
    ooo! i loveeee this! awesome job 5*s!

  3. My Shoes

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 9 months ago

    very funny, o no she didn’t lol she did,what nerve, loved it.

  4. My Shoes

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 9 months ago

    A sad shame, indeed. Shoes lost are tragedies.

  5. My Shoes

    flute faerie's Buddy Icon flute faerie

    Posted 9 months ago

    Nice story. I agree w/ Lone Writer;shoes lost are tragedies.

  6. My Shoes

    Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3's Buddy Icon Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hey! that woman was me!jk

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