Feeling Faint

by Misheru O'ku

take off this dress please!
dew drops of sweat start to form
her skin becomes pale

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Feeling Faint

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 7 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh, a haiku! Took me a minute, but in my defense I’m kind of tired right now.

    LoA

  2. Feeling Faint

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Beautiful. It packs so much into three lines.

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