From Hell in the Burrow

by Nick

“We’ve got a ‘nother one, sir,” said Constable Wilhelm Maniculatus, his whiskers ablaze with activity. “A mess, like the others. A ‘nother Ripper slaying, sir.”

“Damn,” sighed Detective Liam Leucopus, idly stroking his hairless tail. He paused, the tension becoming tangible. “The body?” he finally asked.

“Like the others, partially devoured,” came Wilhelm’s reply.

The third, thought Liam, the damn third slaying and no clues yet. The City and Her mice couldn’t take much more of this.

“I’ve gotta go to the Ruling Council,” Liam stated. “You find out if another letter was delivered to the Press. And then get some rest; we’ll be rounding up the House of Onychomys tonight.”

“Sir?” asked Wilhelm, his right ear folding downwards slightly, which Liam knew indicated that his old friend was confused.

“They’re cannibals, Wilhelm,” Liam said, turning away. “They’re the closest thing to a clue we’ve got.”

Neither mouse noticed the rodent on membranous wings flutter between rooftops, its work for the night done.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. From Hell in the Burrow

    RicoLaser's Buddy Icon RicoLaser

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is freakin’ awesome. I might do a sequel if I feel ambitious enough.

  2. From Hell in the Burrow

    Nick's Buddy Icon Nick

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Thank you and please feel free to write sequels. If anyone wants to know where the weird surnames come from: they are the Species of mouse in question, or – in the case of the House of Onychomys (aka Grasshopper mice) – the Genus. Wikipedia entries will give you all that scientific information, if you care to use it.

  3. From Hell in the Burrow

    WordsLikeWater's Buddy Icon WordsLikeWater

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I really like it! Keep going. If you write a couple more, I might add one or two as well.

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