The Windy City

by insomniac

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“You what?”

“I already told you! I BOUGHT A PLACE IN CHICAGO !”

“Why?!”

“So I can go to school here, ya know and-”

“You’re insane.”

“I know. Great, isn’t it?”

“Not really.”

“But Mom-”

”...”

“Mom?”

”. . .”

“MOM?”

A dropped call can ruin a conversation. Cingular is the new AT&T.

Prequels

Write a prequel

Sequels

Write a sequel

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Windy City

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 9 months ago

    that conversation was kinda ruined before it began….it didn’t need sell service to mess it up :)

  2. The Windy City

    Nick's Buddy Icon Nick

    Posted 9 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I don’t know if I would classify this as a “twist ending,” but it gets points for making me laugh my ass off.

  3. The Windy City

    insomniac's Buddy Icon insomniac

    Posted 9 months ago

    hee hee mistress cant blame ya… this isnt exactly my “greatest” writing piece…

  4. The Windy City

    uselessness' Buddy Icon uselessness

    Posted 9 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I’ve got to agree with Mistress and Nick. The conversation is certainly bad news but I wouldn’t call it a twist; it heads in the same direction from beginning to end. But it’s a nice take on the whole Cingular/AT&T thing (and was in that regard unexpected). Thanks for entering my challenge!

  5. The Windy City

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    hahahahahaahahahahahahahahahaahah i love those commercials=]

  6. The Windy City

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 8 months ago

    You’re always a parent…whether you want to or not.

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